Made that in one hour? That's impressive.
Could have been worse. Keep at it, your next try will be better.
Although I'm not entirely sure what I just watched, the animation was done quite well and the short was mildly amusing. Very short though; the credits seemed to take more time than the video. I hope to see this author take on larger projects in the future.
I'm working on a few projects I'll be detailing in my next news post, most of which will not be done for a while, but I'm excited to see what I can do in a full animation.
I really don't get the humor, it just seems stupid to me. I'm not well versed in nipple jokes, but stupidity isn't always funny, and here it definitely didn't work for me. Try creating some content with more substance rather than relying on people thinking that nipples and dicks are just super funny.
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